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Ha! Interesting bait for a sea creature! But then, some of them do like shiny lures. š
Minor typo in panel two. Unless the dude talks like Dracula. “I’ll giive it another target to hit! Bleh bleh!”
Fixed. Bleh bleh!
Want another one? š First panel: “Can you bring that thing TO the surface?” š
Your story is going great here, Mark. I eagerly await each new page!
Dangit.. No “edit” button.
I am slightly confused by one thing. What time of day is it? The sky colors, while nice in themselves, make it look like late evening. Of course, the only thing I see even resembling a sun is Ansen’s lure. š
Fixed. I suppose I should do a better job of proofreading these.
The time of day I’m going for is evening with an overcast sky.
>>The time of day Iām going for is evening with an overcast sky.
Cool! My eyesight is perfect!! š š š
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Ha! Interesting bait for a sea creature! But then, some of them do like shiny lures. š
Minor typo in panel two. Unless the dude talks like Dracula. “I’ll giive it another target to hit! Bleh bleh!”
Fixed. Bleh bleh!
Want another one? š
First panel: “Can you bring that thing TO the surface?” š
Your story is going great here, Mark. I eagerly await each new page!
Dangit.. No “edit” button.
I am slightly confused by one thing. What time of day is it? The sky colors, while nice in themselves, make it look like late evening. Of course, the only thing I see even resembling a sun is Ansen’s lure. š
Fixed. I suppose I should do a better job of proofreading these.
The time of day I’m going for is evening with an overcast sky.
>>The time of day Iām going for is evening with an overcast sky.
Cool! My eyesight is perfect!! š š š