Sore Loser Sep01 by Mark McKay on September 1, 2014 at 12:00 am Chapter: Chapter 4 - Three PiecesCharacters: April Blackbrook, Brian Gorse, Joel Sagebrush, Thomas FinestoneLocation: Mud Wren Village Related Comics ¬ Plan B Time to go Eruption Smoke on the water Dinner Service
You’ve gotten very good with expressions. I particularly like April in panel three, while Joel is best in one and two. (IMHO :-))
Grrrrrr… Take his little toothpick away and smack ‘im down April…
Sorry… just got caught up in the drama here.
Did you say Joel’s line in panel 2 out loud before writing it?
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